[MikeGarcia]

Originally Posted by darwinbulldog

"Hi I am selling my babe ruth 1916 baseball card that i got as a gift from grandfather that was in his will and it was actuly my great grandfathers. I'm not a big fan of sports so I have desisde to give away the card. It dose have a very samel tear at the up right corner that's bearly noticeable. I don't know how much these go for so I'm starting the bid at 100$"

Just starting with the syntax, spelling, punctuation, and grammar and setting aside most of the inaccuracies in the semantic content, it should read:

"Hi, I am selling a 1916 Babe Ruth baseball card which I received as an heirloom from my grandfather and which was originally my great-grandfather's. I'm not a big fan of sports, so I have decided to sell the card. It has a very small, barely noticeable, tear at the upper-right corner. I don't know how much these go for, so I'm starting the bidding at $100."

..now please hack into his feedback ( 5 ) and correct his " feedback left for others"...

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