I am certainly no expert. Like everyone else, I can check examples online and compare. I see 3 things that I think would warrant further investigation. In almost every example, Sam is in quotation marks Yours isn't. First and last name runs together. Yours doesn't. Third, the downward stroke of the R looks a little too funky. It has a backward slant. In all, this is a card I would set aside until I could devote more time examining it.
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