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			Most cards don't require much more than a few lines. One paragraph on the background of the player One paragraph on the card's grade and if needed; an explanation of the importance of said condition. NOW; there are memorabilia pieces which require more detail as to explain WHY the piece exists may take a few paragraphs. Thus; for the average collector on this board; card descriptions are too long and mem descriptions need more detail. But we also have to remember; that not every collector knows what we DO about these cards. Rich | 
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			I agree with Rich's final observation.  I like longer and more detailed descriptions on some of the rarer cards and sets about which I know little more than their catalog designation.  I also don't mind well-written, well-researched information on a player, especially if the information offered is something obscure.  REA writes very long descriptions on some of their lots and I appreciate the information.  As far as negatives, I especially would like to see less of the "this is so great for its grade" hype and more detailed explanation of the actual condition--like telling me which corner is weak, which I might not see in a scan.  I can also do without the goofy synonyms, similes and metaphors.  I feel like Leonard Pinth-Garnell when I read some of them: Welcome to Bad Auction Writing.
		 
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			The problem is when you have to read 1,000 words before you first learn what is being sold.  I once half-jokingly said an auction house should underline the first line of the object description, so those of us who wanted could skip the novella.
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